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The Midnight Case

Rain, neon and one last case. Diego, a detective who never forgets a face, is hired to find a missing jazz singer — and every clue points back to Diego’s own past.

Style
Noir
Language
English
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12 pages
Characters
Diego
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Cover and first pages

  1. The Midnight Case — cover: Diego stands in a rain-soaked alley under a flickering neon sign, coat collar up, holding a photograph, venetian-blind…
    Cover
  2. The Midnight Case — page 1: A rainy night office; a mysterious client slides a photo of a singer across Diego's desk.
    Page 1
  3. The Midnight Case — page 2: A smoky jazz club; nobody looks at Diego.
    Page 2
  4. The Midnight Case — page 3
    Page 3
  5. The Midnight Case — page 4: In a smoky police precinct office, Diego drops a file of evidence on the sergeant's desk while flashbulbs go off and the…
    Page 4

The story, beat by beat

  1. A rainy night: a mysterious client slides a photo across Diego’s desk.

  2. The smoky jazz club where the singer was last seen; nobody talks.

  3. A matchbook clue carries the number of Diego’s old precinct.

  4. A chase along the foggy docks ends in a near miss.

  5. Twist: the singer staged the disappearance to expose a corrupt police captain.

  6. Diego brings the evidence into the light: the final lead.

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Cover

THE MIDNIGHT CASE — Diego stands in a rain-soaked alley under a flickering neon sign, coat collar up, holding a photograph, venetian-blind shadows across the wall.

Page 1

  1. A rainy night office; a mysterious client slides a photo of a singer across Diego's desk.

    Caption Midnight. Rain again.

  2. The photo: a jazz singer in a sequinned dress.

    Client says: Find her.

  3. Diego lights no cigarette, just stares at the rain.

Page 2

  1. A smoky jazz club; nobody looks at Diego.

  2. A matchbook on the bar with a precinct number on it.

  3. Diego pockets it, eyes narrowing.

    Diego thinks: My old precinct.

Page 3

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Page 4

  1. In a smoky police precinct office, Diego drops a file of evidence on the sergeant's desk while flashbulbs go off and the corrupt captain is led away in handcuffs. Signs and papers carry no readable names or logos.

    Caption Case closed.